Jack and the Beanstalk

Elizabeth’s homework this week was to write a story about Jack’s adventure at the top of the beanstalk. On Friday night she told the story whilst her Mummy created a story map for it, including the key events and any super vocabulary she wanted to use. This is what it looked like:

storymap

On Sunday morning, Elizabeth typed the story with her Daddy using the story map to help her. This is her finished story:

Download (DOCX, 748KB)

She did very well I’m sure you’ll agree!

Comments: 5

  1. WOW Elizabeth, what a fabulous story this is.
    You have included lots of super vocabulary, which really helps to bring your story to life šŸ™‚
    My Year 5’s are starting to look at traditional stories at the end of this week- would you mind if I showed them this super story?
    Thankyou for sharing your writing šŸ™‚
    Mr Handley šŸ™‚

    • Elizabeth says:

      Thank you for your comment.

      Of course you can show your class – I hope they like it!

      Elizabeth šŸ™‚

  2. Kristin says:

    Elizabeth,
    What a wonderful story! You did a great job on this! When Elliott is bigger, you’ll have to read him some of your stories!
    Love,
    Kristin

    • Elizabeth says:

      I’d love to read Elliott some šŸ™‚ x

  3. nana says:

    What A FAB STORY I was so glad when the dragon and Jack became friends and Jack wasn’t scared anymore. This is very well written and has loads of very good describing words x

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